1. In the future, I would like to work with children, who I’m quite good at. 2. The reason that I stopped taking lessons is that I was struggling to make the school payments on time. 3. The place we liked the most was Santa Teresa Beach, where nature is still pretty much untouched. 4. I was employed to be a data entry clerk, whose job is to input data into a computer from forms. 5. I’ll never forget the day when I lost my passport on the way to the airport. 6. When she got there, there were at least ten other people who were also applying for the job. Combined sentences: 1. I talked to many of my childhood friends at our high school reunion whom I hadn’t seen in years. 2. She likes wearing expensive clothes which are manufactured by famous brands. 3. The position would give him some work experience in management which he doesn’t have right now. 4. I used to teach French to children whose first language was English. 5. I was asked to write an article on a complicated topic about which I knew nothing. Improved paragraph: In my opinion, the excessive use of electronic devices such as tablets and cell phones, which can easily become addictive due to the games and apps found on these devices, can be detrimental to children’s health. These games and apps are mostly not educational, resulting in children spending less time on healthy physical activities, which is particularly problematic for overweight children. Additionally, the unsupervised use of electronic devices provides children with access to the internet and social media platforms where they can be exposed to inappropriate content and online predators.