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Here are the corrected sentences: 1. Despite the film's amazing effects, its plot is not so appealing. (Remove 'of') 2. Although Hoa doesn't look very beautiful, she has a kind heart. (Replace 'However' with 'Although') 3. In spite of the fact that I don't like her way of talking, I appreciate her effort. (Add 'of the fact') 4. My brother isn't very young, but he talks like a middle-aged woman. (Replace 'nevertheless' with 'but') 5. Although Mary has recently moved to this city, she is so familiar with it. (Change 'the fact that' to 'has' and 'recently moved' to 'has recently moved') 6. I often eat fast food; however, it is not good for my health. (Use semicolon before 'however') 7. My brother wants to travel around the world, although he can't afford it. (Move 'although' to the end and use a comma after 'world') 8. I try to spare some time for my children, although I am very busy. (Move 'although' to the end and use a comma after 'children') 1. We managed to arrive at the train station on time despite the traffic jam. 2. I don't want to buy a new computer, having enough money. 3. In spite of not living far away from school, both of them usually go to school late. 4. My brother went to school yesterday in spite of his sickness. 5. He has a weak heart, looking healthy. 6. Although not so rich, James often does charity. 7. We enjoyed our party last night although the weather was awful.