bài dưới đây có sai ngữ pháp không

Có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ trong bài viết của bạn. Dưới đây là một số lỗi chính: 1. "The weather is warm good" -> "The weather is warm and good" (thêm "and" để kết nối hai tính từ) 2. "I don't have go to school" -> "I don't have to go to school" (sử dụng "don't have to" thay vì "don't have" để diễn tả sự không bắt buộc) 3. "I love going to beach in summer" -> "I love going to the beach in summer" (thêm "the" để chỉ một nơi cụ thể) 4. "and watching the sunset in the evening are little joys" -> "and watching the sunset in the evening is a little joy" (sử dụng "is" thay vì "are" để thống nhất với chủ ngữ) 5. "for me, summer is my favorite time of the year, summer is not just a season ; it is a time to enjoy life, rechange my energy, and make wonderful memonies" -> "To me, summer is my favorite time of the year. Summer is not just a season; it is a time to enjoy life, recharge my energy, and make wonderful memories" (cải thiện cách sử dụng dấu câu và từ vựng) 6. "With my loved ones" -> "with my loved ones" (không cần viết hoa chữ "W") Bài viết sau khi chỉnh sửa sẽ trở thành: Summer is my favorite time of the year. The weather is warm and good, and I don't have to go to school, so I can relax and have fun. I love going to the beach in summer. I can play in the sand, and eat ice cream. Summer is also a good time to enjoy my hobbies. I can read books, listen to music or play badminton with my friends. Watching the sunset in the evening is a little joy that makes summer special. To me, summer is my favorite time of the year. Summer is not just a season; it is a time to enjoy life, recharge my energy, and make wonderful memories with my loved ones. That's why I love it so much.