Giúp mình với!Giải hộ mình câu này với các bạn Thầy Trần Thanh Tùng - Facebook Page: TIẾNG ANH THẦY TÙNG - SĐT: 0901531555 & 0931015333 (zalo & sms),TIẾNG ANH THẦY TÙNG MISTAKE CORRECTION NO.38 - G9C,Date: _____ Class: _____ Name:,,---o0o---,INSTRUCTIONS: There are 10 words in the following passage that need correction. Find the,words and correct them.,PERSONALITY AND HEALTH, "Line 1 Line 2 Line 3 Line 4 Line 5 Line 6 Line 7 Line 8 Line 9 Line 10 Line 11 Line 12 Line 13 Line 14","There is increasing evidence that health is linked to personality. Therefore, until now, the relationship has not affected the way health care is delivered. There are several reasons for this. Some health workers doubt whether there is a direct link among health and personality or whether it's just a coincident. Some feel it is their professional duty to treat all patients in a same way. Others argue that delivering health services according to patients' personalities have minimal impact and therefore isn't worth the effort. However, some psychologists believe that applying different procedures to people with different personalities could have a significant, positive effect in health. Search into personality has, in recent years, focused on the Big Five model of personality types. This model measures what neurotic, extrovert, open to experience, agreeable and conscientious a person is. Some of these personality types have been studying in relation to health. For example, conscientious people tend to be less likely to smoke, drink too much alcohol or be inactive. However, in another cases, the relationship is less clear." ,ANSWER:, Line,,,,Word,Correction Line,,,Line,, Line,,,Line,, Line,,,Line,, ,,,Line,, Line,,,Line,,

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Giúp mình với!Giải hộ mình câu này với các bạn Thầy Trần Thanh Tùng - Facebook Page: TIẾNG ANH THẦY TÙNG - SĐT: 0901531555 & 0931015333 (zalo & sms),TIẾNG ANH THẦY TÙNG MISTAKE CORRECTION NO.38 - G9C,Date: _____ Class: _____ Name:,<img src=https://minio.ftech.ai/cvdata/fqa/prod/public/illustration_images/81911bf3f04244d7a22981c0a04515be.jpg />,---o0o---,INSTRUCTIONS: There are 10 words in the following passage that need correction. Find the,words and correct them.,PERSONALITY AND HEALTH,

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 Line 14","There is increasing evidence that health is linked to personality. Therefore, until 
 now, the relationship has not affected the way health care is delivered. There are several 
 reasons for this. Some health workers doubt whether there is a direct link among health 
 and personality or whether it&#x27;s just a coincident. Some feel it is their professional duty to 
 treat all patients in a same way. Others argue that delivering health services according to 
 patients&#x27; personalities have minimal impact and therefore isn&#x27;t worth the effort. However, 
 some psychologists believe that applying different procedures to people with different 
 personalities could have a significant, positive effect in health. 
 Search into personality has, in recent years, focused on the Big Five model of 
 personality types. This model measures what neurotic, extrovert, open to experience, 
 agreeable and conscientious a person is. Some of these personality types have been 
 studying in relation to health. For example, conscientious people tend to be less likely to 
 smoke, drink too much alcohol or be inactive. However, in another cases, the 
 relationship is less clear."

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Timi · Accepted Answer

Here are the answers with the requested format:

1. Line 2, Word 2, "increasing" to "growing"
2. Line 2, Line 2, "There is growing evidence that health is linked to personality."
3. Line 5, Word 5, "among" to "between"
4. Line 5, Line 5, "Some health workers doubt whether there is a direct link between health and personality or whether it&#x27;s just a coincidence."
5. Line 9, Word 9, "applying" to "tailoring"
6. Line 9, Line 9, "Some psychologists believe that tailoring different procedures to people with different personalities could have a significant, positive effect on health."
7. Line 11, Word 11, "Search" to "Research"
8. Line 11, Line 11, "Research into personality has, in recent years, focused on the Big Five model of personality types."
9. Line 13, Word 13, "measures" to "assesses"
10. Line 13, Line 13, "This model assesses what neurotic, extrovert, open to experience, agreeable and conscientious a person is."
11. Line 15, Word 15, "studying" to "studied"
12. Line 15, Line 15, "Some of these personality types have been studied in relation to health."
13. Line 17, Word 17, "in another cases" to "in other cases"
14. Line 17, Line 17, "However, in other cases, the relationship is less clear."