Task 7 - Using your notes from exercise 6, write a paragraph plan for your essay. Use the essay in exercise 3 as a model and follow the advice in the Writing Strategy - SHS Friends Global 11 page 45

1. Nội dung câu hỏi

Using your notes from exercise 6, write a paragraph plan for your essay. Use the essay in exercise 3 as a model and follow the advice in the Writing Strategy.

2. Phương pháp giải

Sử dụng các ghi chú của bạn từ bài tập 6, hãy viết một kế hoạch bố trí đoạn văn cho bài luận của bạn. Sử dụng bài luận trong bài tập 3 làm mẫu và làm theo lời khuyên trong Chiến lược viết.

3. Lời giải chi tiết

Introduction:

Topic sentence: A healthy body is a healthy mind, and sport plays an important role in maintaining both.

Thesis statement: There are a number of ways to add more sport to the school timetable without affecting other subjects, such as offering sports programs during lunch breaks, using PE classes to teach students about different sports and how to play them, and partnering with local sports clubs and organizations to offer after-school sports programs.

Main body:

Paragraph 1: Discuss the benefits of adding more sport to the school timetable.

Evidence and example: A study by the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention found that students who participate in regular physical activity are more likely to have better academic performance, improved mental health, and lower rates of obesity.

Evidence and example: A study by the University of Bristol found that students who participate in team sports are more likely to develop important life skills such as teamwork, communication, and leadership.

Paragraph 2: Discuss some specific ways to add more sport to the school timetable without affecting other subjects.

Offer sports programs during lunch breaks. This would allow students to participate in sports without having to sacrifice their other classes.

Use PE classes to teach students about different sports and how to play them. This would give students a wider range of sports to choose from and help them to develop their skills.

Partner with local sports clubs and organizations to offer after-school sports programs. This would provide students with more opportunities to participate in sports outside of school hours.

Offer virtual PE classes to students who cannot participate in physical activities due to medical conditions or other reasons. This would ensure that all students have the opportunity to participate in physical activity, regardless of their circumstances.

Conclusion:

Restate thesis statement.

Summarize main points.

Call to action. Schools should implement some of the suggestions in this essay to make it easier for students to participate in sports.