Giúp mình với! Thầy Trần Thanh Tùng - Facebook Page: TIÊNG ANH THẤY TÙNG - SĐT: 0901531555 & 0931015333 (zalo & sms),TIẾNG ANH THẦY TÙNG MISTAKE CORRECTION NO.40 - G9C,Date: _____ Class: _____ Name: _____,,---o0o---,INSTRUCTIONS: There are 10 words in the following passage that need correction. Find the,words and correct them.,HOW THE PANDEMIC CHANGED OUR COMPANY'S POLICY, "Line 1 Line 2 Line 3 Line 4 Line 5 Line 6 Line 7 Line 8 Line 9 Line 10 Line 11 Line 12 Line 13","The pandemic changed everything. With everyone forcing to stay away from the office and our childcare centre, we had to put all our efforts into enabling staff to work from home. It was an 180-degree turnaround for us, as we had always tried to make the workplace as attractive a place as possibly. Now, we were encouraging them to stay away. Many could not cope for the demands of child care on top of work and threatened to leave. Suddenly, we had to listen to our staff instead of doing the shots. Which they wanted was the flexibility to manage their private lives alongside their working lives. Instead of inconvenience, they wanted choice: the option to be able to choose child care, medical or sport facilities, rather than feeling obliged those at work, or even the option to care for children or elderly relatives herself. What's more, mental health care was also deemed as high a priority as general health care, something we had overlook in the past. In no time at all, wellbeing and counselling initiatives were put in place." ,ANSWER:, ,Word,Correction,,Word,Correction Line,,,Line,, Line,,,Line,, Line _____,,,Line,, Line _____,,,Line,, Line,,,Line,,

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Giúp mình với! Thầy Trần Thanh Tùng - Facebook Page: TIÊNG ANH THẤY TÙNG - SĐT: 0901531555 & 0931015333 (zalo & sms),TIẾNG ANH THẦY TÙNG MISTAKE CORRECTION NO.40 - G9C,Date: _____ Class: _____ Name: _____,<img src=https://minio.ftech.ai/cvdata/fqa/prod/public/illustration_images/51bff653c9404679864057793ecde1c5.jpg />,---o0o---,INSTRUCTIONS: There are 10 words in the following passage that need correction. Find the,words and correct them.,HOW THE PANDEMIC CHANGED OUR COMPANY'S POLICY,

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 Line 13","The pandemic changed everything. With everyone forcing to stay away from the 
 office and our childcare centre, we had to put all our efforts into enabling staff to work 
 from home. It was an 180-degree turnaround for us, as we had always tried to make the 
 workplace as attractive a place as possibly. Now, we were encouraging them to stay 
 away. Many could not cope for the demands of child care on top of work and threatened 
 to leave. Suddenly, we had to listen to our staff instead of doing the shots. 
 Which they wanted was the flexibility to manage their private lives alongside their 
 working lives. Instead of inconvenience, they wanted choice: the option to be able to 
 choose child care, medical or sport facilities, rather than feeling obliged those at work, or 
 even the option to care for children or elderly relatives herself. What's more, mental 
 health care was also deemed as high a priority as general health care, something we 
 had overlook in the past. In no time at all, wellbeing and counselling initiatives were put 
 in place."

,ANSWER:,

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Accepted Answer

Here are the corrected words:

1. forcing -> forced
   Line: "With everyone forcing to stay away from the office..."
   Corrected line: "With everyone forced to stay away from the office..."

2. enabling -> enable
   Line: "we had to put all our efforts into enabling staff to work from home."
   Corrected line: "we had to put all our efforts into enabling staff to enable work from home" or a better correction would be "to put all our efforts into enabling staff to work from home" -> "to put all our efforts into helping staff enable work from home" -> "to put all our efforts into enabling our staff to work from home" (better sentence construction).

Line, forcing -> forced,
   Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase)

3. possibly -> possible
   Line: "we had always tried to make the workplace as attractive a place as possibly."
   Corrected line: "we had always tried to make the workplace as attractive a place as possible."

Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase), 
   Line, possibly -> possible,

4. for -> of
   Line: "Many could not cope for the demands of child care on top of work..."
   Corrected line: "Many could not cope with the demands of child care on top of work..."

Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase), 
   Line, possibly -> possible,
   Line, for -> of,

5. doing -> calling
   Line: "Suddenly, we had to listen to our staff instead of doing the shots."
   Corrected line: "Suddenly, we had to listen to our staff instead of calling the shots."

Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase), 
   Line, possibly -> possible,
   Line, for -> of,
   Line, doing -> calling,

6. Which -> What
   Line: "Which they wanted was the flexibility to manage their private lives alongside their working lives."
   Corrected line: "What they wanted was the flexibility to manage their private lives alongside their working lives."

Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase), 
   Line, possibly -> possible,
   Line, for -> of,
   Line, doing -> calling,
   Line, Which -> What,

7. those -> these
   Line: "...rather than feeling obliged those at work..."
   Corrected line: "...rather than feeling obliged to use these at work..."

Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase), 
   Line, possibly -> possible,
   Line, for -> of,
   Line, doing -> calling,
   Line, Which -> What,
   Line, those -> these,

8. or -> and
   Line: "...the option to care for children or elderly relatives herself."
   Corrected line: "...the option to care for children and elderly relatives themselves."

Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase), 
   Line, possibly -> possible,
   Line, for -> of,
   Line, doing -> calling,
   Line, Which -> What,
   Line, those -> these,
   Line, or -> and,

9. overlook -> overlooked
   Line: "...something we had overlook in the past."
   Corrected line: "...something we had overlooked in the past."

Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase), 
   Line, possibly -> possible,
   Line, for -> of,
   Line, doing -> calling,
   Line, Which -> What,
   Line, those -> these,
   Line, or -> and,
   Line, overlook -> overlooked,

10. wellbeing -> well-being
    Line: "...wellbeing and counselling initiatives were put in place."
    Corrected line: "...well-being and counselling initiatives were put in place."

Line, enabling -> enable (sentence needs a rephrase), 
    Line, possibly -> possible,
    Line, for -> of,
    Line, doing -> calling,
    Line, Which -> What,
    Line, those -> these,
    Line, or -> and,
    Line, overlook -> overlooked,
    Line, wellbeing -> well-being