Giúp mình với! INSTRUCTIONS: There are 10 words in the following passage that need correction. Find the,words and correct them.,HOW THE PANDEMIC CHANGED OUR COMPANY'S POLICY,

"9 11
1112
13","The pandemic changed everything. With everyone forcing to stay away from the
office and our childcare centre, we had to put all our efforts into enabling staff to work
from home. It was an 180-degree turnaround for us, as we had always tried to make the
workplace as attractive a place as possibly. Now, we were encouraging them to stay
away. Many could not cope for the demands of child care on top of work and threatened
to leave. Suddenly, we had to listen to our staff instead of doing the shots.
Which they wanted was the flexibility to manage their private lives alongside their
working lives. Instead of inconvenience, they wanted choice: the option to be able to
choose child care, medical or sport facilities, rather than feeling obliged those at work, or
even the option to care for children or elderly relatives herself. What's more, mental
health care was also deemed as high a priority as general health care, something we
had overlook in the past. In no time at all, wellbeing and counselling initiatives were put
in place."

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Question

Giúp mình với! INSTRUCTIONS: There are 10 words in the following passage that need correction. Find the,words and correct them.,HOW THE PANDEMIC CHANGED OUR COMPANY'S POLICY,

"9 11 
 1112 
 13","The pandemic changed everything. With everyone forcing to stay away from the 
 office and our childcare centre, we had to put all our efforts into enabling staff to work 
 from home. It was an 180-degree turnaround for us, as we had always tried to make the 
 workplace as attractive a place as possibly. Now, we were encouraging them to stay 
 away. Many could not cope for the demands of child care on top of work and threatened 
 to leave. Suddenly, we had to listen to our staff instead of doing the shots. 
 Which they wanted was the flexibility to manage their private lives alongside their 
 working lives. Instead of inconvenience, they wanted choice: the option to be able to 
 choose child care, medical or sport facilities, rather than feeling obliged those at work, or 
 even the option to care for children or elderly relatives herself. What's more, mental 
 health care was also deemed as high a priority as general health care, something we 
 had overlook in the past. In no time at all, wellbeing and counselling initiatives were put 
 in place."

,WEER,

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Accepted Answer

Here are the 10 words that need correction:

1. forcing -> forced
2. possibly -> possible
3. for -> of
4. doing the shots -> calling the shots
5. Which they wanted -> What they wanted
6. inconvenience -> inconvenience (no change, but rephrased for better grammar) 
7. obliged those -> obliged to use those
8. herself -> themselves (or himself/herself depending on the context)
9. deemed as -> considered
10. overlook -> overlooked